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  • elliemaytk9:

    The place I’m never at.: Ultimate Writing Resource List

    thelastrplord:

    a massively extended version of ruthlesscalculus’ post

    General Tips

    • Joss Whedon’s Top 10 Writing Tips
    • Getting Out of Your Comfort Zone
    • 34 Writing Tips that will make you a Better Writer
    • 50 Free resources that will improve your writing skills
    • 5 ways to get out of the comfort zone and become a stronger writer
    • 10 ways to avoid Writing Insecurity
    • The Writer’s Guide to Overcoming Insecurity
    • The Difference Between Good Writers and Bad Writers
    • You’re Not Hemingway - Developing Your Own Style
    • 7 Ways to use Brain Science to Hook Readers and Reel them In
    • 8 Short Story Tips from Kurt Vonnegut
    • How to Show, Not Tell
    • 5 Essential Story Ingredients
    • How to Write Fiction that grabs your readers from page one
    • Why research is important in writing
    • Make Your Reader Root for Your Main Character
    • Writing Ergonomics (Staying Comfortable Whilst Writing)
    • The Importance of Body Language

    Character Development

    • 10 days of Character Building
    • Name Generators
    • Name Playground
    • Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
    • Seven Common Character Types
    • Handling a Cast of Thousands Part 1 - Getting To Know Your Characters
    • Web Resources for Developing Characters
    • Building Fictional Characters
    • Fiction Writer’s Character Chart
    • Character Building Workshop
    • Tips for Characterization
    • Character Chart for Fiction Writers
    • Villains are people too but…
    • How to Write a Character Bible
    • Character Development Exercises
    • All Your Characters Talk the Same - And They’re Not A Hivemind!
    • Medieval Names Archive
    • Sympathy Without Saintliness
    • Family Echo (Family Tree Maker)
    • Behind The Name
    • 100 Character Development Questions for Writers
    • Aether’s Character Development Worksheet
    • The 12 Common Archetypes
    • Six Types of Courageous Characters
    • Kazza’s List of Character Secrets - Part 1, Part 2
    • Creating Believable Characters With Personality
    • Body Language Cheat Sheet
    • Creating Fictional Characters Series
    • Three Ways to Avoid Lazy Character Description
    • 7 Rules for Picking Names for Fictional Characters
    • Character Development Questionnaire
    • How to Create Fictional Characters
    • Character Name Resources
    • Character Development Template
    • Character Development Through Hobbies
    • Character Flaws List
    • 10 Questions for Creating Believable Characters
    • Ari’s Archetype Series
    • How to Craft Compelling Characters
    • List of 200 Character Traits
    • Writing Characters of the Opposite Sex
    • Making Your Characters Likable
    • Do you really know your characters?
    • Character Development: Virtues
    • Character Development: Vices
    • Character Morality Alignment
    • List of Negative Personality Traits
    • List of Positive Personality Traits
    • List of Emotions - Positive
    • List of Emotions - Negative
    • Loon’s Character Development Series - Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4
    • Phobia List A-L (Part 1), M-Z (Part 2)
    • 30 Day In Depth Character Development Meme
    • Words for Emotions based on Severity
    • Eight Bad Characters
    • High Level Description of the Sixteen Personality Types

    Female Characters

    • How Not to Write Female Characters
    • Writing Female Characters
    • How to write empowering female characters
    • Why I write strong female characters
    • Red Flags for Female Characters Written by Men
    • Writing strong female characters
    • The Female Character Flowchart
    • Eight Heroine Archetypes

    Male Characters

    • Eight Hero Archetypes

    Tips for Specific Characters

    • Writing A Vampire
    • Writing Pansexual Characters
    • Writing Characters on the Police Force
    • Writing Drunk Characters
    • Writing A Manipulative Character
    • Writing A Friends With Benefits Relationship
    • Writing A Natural Born Leader
    • Writing A Flirtatious Character
    • Writing A Nice Character
    • Fiction Writing Exercises for Creating Villains
    • Five Traits to Contribute to an Epic Villain
    • Writing Villains that Rock
    • Writing British Characters
    • How To Write A Character With A Baby
    • On Assassin Characters

    Dialogue

    • It’s Not What They Say…
    • Top 8 Tips for Writing Dialogue
    • Speaking of Dialogue
    • The Great Said Debate
    • He Said, She Said, Who Said What?
    • How to Write Dialogue Unique to Your Characters
    • Writing Dialogue: Go for Realistic, Not Real-Life

    Point of View

    • Establishing The Right Point of View
    • How to Start Writing in the Third Person
    • The I Problem

    Plot, Conflict, Structure and Outline

    • Writing A Novel Using the Snowflake Method
    • Effectively Outlining Your Novel
    • Conflict and Character Within Story Structure
    • Outlining Your Plot
    • Ideas, Plots and Using the Premise Sheets
    • How To Write A Novel
    • Creating Conflict and Sustaining Suspense
    • Plunge Right In…Into Your Story, That Is
    • Tips for Creating a Compelling Plot
    • 36 (plus one) Dramatic Situations
    • The Evil Overlord Devises A Plot: Excerpt from Stupid Plot Tricks
    • Conflict Test
    • What is Conflict?
    • Monomyth
    • The Hero’s Journey: Summary of Steps
    • Outline Your Novel in Thirty Minutes
    • Plotting Without Fears
    • Novel Outlining 101
    • Writing The Perfect Scene
    • One-Page Plotting
    • The Great Swampy Middle
    • How Can You Know What Belongs In Your Book?
    • Create A Plot Outline in 8 Easy Steps
    • How to Organize and Develop Ideas for Your Novel
    • Create Structure in your novel using index cards
    • Choosing the best outline method for you
    • Hatch’s Plot Bank

    Setting & Worldbuilding

    • Magical Word Builder’s Guide
    • I Love The End Of The World
    • World Building 101
    • The Art of Description: Eight Tips to Help Bring Your Settings to Life
    • Creating the Perfect Setting - Part 1
    • Creating a Believable World
    • Setting
    • Character and Setting Interactions
    • Maps Workshop - Developing the Fictional World Through Mapping
    • World Builders Project
    • How To Create Fantasy Worlds
    • Creating Fantasy and Science Fiction Worlds

    Creativity Boosters* denotes prompts

    • *Creative Writing Prompts
    • *Ink Provoking
    • *Story Starter
    • *Story Spinner
    • *Story Kitchen
    • *Language is a Virus
    • *The Dabbling Mum
    • Quick Story Idea Generator
    • Solve Your Problems By Simply Saying Them Out Loud
    • Busting Your Writing Rut
    • Creative Acceleration: 11 Tips To Engineer A Productive Flow
    • Writing Inspiration, Or Sex on a Bicycle
    • The Seven Major Beginner Mistakes
    • Complete Your First Book with these 9 Simple Writing Habits
    • Free Association, Active Imagination, Twilight Imaging
    • Random Book Title Generator
    • Finishing Your Novel
    • Story Starters & Idea Generators
    • Words to Use More Often

    Revision & Grammar

    • How To Rewrite
    • Editing Recipe
    • Cliche Finder
    • Revising Your Novel: Read What You’ve Written
    • Writing 101: Revising A Novel
    • 20 Common Grammar Mistakes That (Almost) Everyone Makes
    • Synonyms for the Most Commonly Used Words of the English Language
    • Grammar Urban Legends

    Tools & Software

    • Tip Of My Tongue - Find the word you’re looking for
    • Write or Die - Stay motivated
    • Stay Focused - Tool for Chrome, lock yourself out of distracting websites
    • My Writing Nook - Online Text Editor, Free
    • Bubbl.us - Online Mind Map Application, Free
    • Family Echo - Online Family Tree Maker, Free
    • Freemind - Mind Map Application; Free; Windows, Mac, Linux, Portable
    • Xmind - Mind Map Application; Free; Windows, Mac, Linux, Portable
    • Liquid Story Binder - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free trial, $45.95; Windows, Portable
    • Scrivener - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free trial, $39.95; Mac
    • SuperNotecard - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free trial, $29; Windows, Mac, Linux, portable
    • yWriter - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free; Windows, Linux, portable
    • JDarkRoom - Minimalist Text Editing Application; free; Windows, Mac, Linux, portable
    • AutoRealm - Map Creation Application; free; Windows, Linux with Wine

    Specific Help

    • Fashion Terminology
    • All About Kissing
    • Genre Help: Romance
    • 187 Mental Illnesses
    • Types of Mental Illness
    • Eye Color List
    • Spectral Groupings

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  • dythetiern:

INGREDIENTS1 1/3 cup all-purpose flour1 tablespoon granulated sugar1 teaspoon baking powder1/2 teaspoon baking soda1/2 teaspoon salt1 cup buttermilk1 large egg2 tablespoons butter, meltedand cooled to lukewarm,plus more for cooking1/2 teaspoon pure vanilla extract1/2 teaspoon pure mint extract*3 to 4 drops green food coloring (optional)3/4 cup mini semisweet chocolate chips, plus more for toppingWhipped cream, for servingVanilla ice cream, for servingStore-bought sauce is fine*Mint and peppermint extracts are similar but not identical in flavor. Mint extract typically contains both peppermint and spearmint, whereas pure peppermint is popular in holiday treats like candy canes. Use whichever minty extract you prefer.
PREPARATION1. Sift together flour, sugar, baking powder, baking soda, and salt into a bowl.
2. Whisk together buttermilk, egg, butter, extracts, and food coloring (if using) in a small bowl. Add to dry ingredients and stir until incorporated. Stir in chocolate chips.
3. Heat a large nonstick skillet or griddle over medium heat. Add 1/2 tablespoon butter; it should sizzle and melt almost immediately. Ladle 1/4 cup of pancake batter into skillet for each pancake, taking care not to let the pancakes run together. Cook for 1 to 2 minutes, until bottom is golden brown and edges begin to bubble, then carefully flip and cook for 1 to 2 minutes more. Transfer to plates. Repeat with remaining batter.
4. Serve warm with whipped cream, vanilla ice cream, hot fudge sauce, and more chocolate chips, if desired.
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    dythetiern:

    INGREDIENTS
    1 1/3 cup all-purpose flour
    1 tablespoon granulated sugar
    1 teaspoon baking powder
    1/2 teaspoon baking soda
    1/2 teaspoon salt
    1 cup buttermilk
    1 large egg
    2 tablespoons butter, melted
    and cooled to lukewarm,
    plus more for cooking
    1/2 teaspoon pure vanilla extract
    1/2 teaspoon pure mint extract*
    3 to 4 drops green food coloring (optional)
    3/4 cup mini semisweet chocolate chips, plus more for topping
    Whipped cream, for serving
    Vanilla ice cream, for serving
    Store-bought sauce is fine
    *Mint and peppermint extracts are similar but not identical in flavor. Mint extract typically contains both peppermint and spearmint, whereas pure peppermint is popular in holiday treats like candy canes. Use whichever minty extract you prefer.

    PREPARATION
    1. Sift together flour, sugar, baking powder, baking soda, and salt into a bowl.

    2. Whisk together buttermilk, egg, butter, extracts, and food coloring (if using) in a small bowl. Add to dry ingredients and stir until incorporated. Stir in chocolate chips.

    3. Heat a large nonstick skillet or griddle over medium heat. Add 1/2 tablespoon butter; it should sizzle and melt almost immediately. Ladle 1/4 cup of pancake batter into skillet for each pancake, taking care not to let the pancakes run together. Cook for 1 to 2 minutes, until bottom is golden brown and edges begin to bubble, then carefully flip and cook for 1 to 2 minutes more. Transfer to plates. Repeat with remaining batter.

    4. Serve warm with whipped cream, vanilla ice cream, hot fudge sauce, and more chocolate chips, if desired.

    Source

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  • mark-gaytits:

    Some resources for those writing medieval-type stories:

    • list of medieval jobs
    • more medieval jobs
    • lords of the manor
    • ladies of the manor
    • medieval ladies
    • medieval weapons
    • medieval names
    • more medieval names
    • guide to medieval terms
    • more medieval terms
    • how to write sword-fight scenes
    • armor

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  • distraction:

perfuqed:

kubbypan:

karkatquest:

ohbabyitsnatalie:

How to read people’s minds. Watch Those Pupils A persons pupils get bigger when they are aroused, interested and/or receptive. If you look into his or her eyes and see those pupils growing large - it’s looking good for you. Basically big pupils (unless it’s just dark) mean a person likes what they see. Try this experiment, and you’ll understand how immediate this effect can be. Go right now and look in the mirror at your own eyes. As you look at them, imagine a sexy man or woman you are attracted to - in whatever way would turn you on. You’ll see that your pupils get bigger in just seconds. Actually, if you love to fish, they may get big just thinking about a lake you love. Anything you like to look at can make your pupils bigger. Now, there are two ways to use this.1. Mind Reading For the mind reading part, you can now watch for changing of pupil size to know if someone is interested in you or what you have to say. And yes, shrinking pupils generally do mean the person is not interested. Just be careful to note if light in the persons eyes is causing the shrinking pupils. In addition to judging the general level of interest and/or receptivity to you, you can use pupil size to go a little deeper into a person’s mind. For example, during the course of a conversation, you can describe various scenes or delve into different topics, while watching the persons pupils. If their pupils shrank at the mention of skiing, and got huge when you described a beach you like, you can be fairly certain they would like the Bahamas over a ski resort. The great thing about this little trick is that you can easily test it and refine your technique. Start with a friend whose interests you know already, and watch their pupils as you describe various places or even ideas. See if getting them to visualize, by saying something “Remember how that car of yours looked,” gets a bigger pupil response.2. Influencing If you haven’t yet experimented with your own pupils, by watching them in the mirror, go try it now. You’ll find that you can quickly train yourself to change your pupil size at will. Just find a mental image or two that gets them really big, and use these as necessary. Look at a light briefly when you want to shrink your pupils back down. Now, how do you use this? We all use little clues like pupil size as we interact with people. We are affected by people’s expressions and body language even when we haven’t yet learned to identify it. In other words - the person in front of you will unconsciously pick upon your enlarging pupils. They will unconsciously take this to mean that you like them, and for many people, this will make them like you more. Listen. This is the easiest and most effective way to read minds. Just pay attention, ask a few questions and listen to what they say about themselves.Watch the Posture. Leaning towards indicates that the person is interested and receptive.Watch For Hair Play. When women play with their hair while talking to you, it is almost always a sign of receptivity.Watch the Mouth. A slightly open mouth is a sign of curiosity and interest.Watch the Head. A tilting head, especially if it comes with a smile and eye contact, is a sign that the person likes you.Watch the Eyes  Here is what people’s minds are doing when they are thinking or asked to remember something. This is true for most right handed people (reverse all this for left-handed people): As you face them, and their eyes go:Up and to the right - they are remembering a visual image. Up and to the left - They are constructing a visual image. To the right - They are remembering sounds or conversation. To the left - The are constructing sounds or conversations. Down and to the right - They are in an internal dialog. Down and to the left - They are accessing kinesthetic feelings, tastes and smells.How to influence the opposite sex:Use Mirroring and Matching. Match the speed of your speech to that of the person you’re talking to. Sit like he or she is sitting. Use the words they use. This is a fast way to build rapport. Once there is a “bond” built, you can start to lead the conversation and actions where you want them to go.Compliment Her or Him. Discover what the person is proud of first, then find a genuine way to compliment them in that area.Listen. Always show a genuine interest in what the person is saying. Ask appropriate questions, so the person knows you’re paying attention. Use their interests to lead into a direction you want to go.Make Good First Impressions. Men usually form a quick visual impression in less than 20 seconds, and then make another judgment based on appearance and personality within a couple minutes. Women usually place less immediate emphasis on appearance, and form an “intuitive” first impression in a couple minutes. The lesson? Work fast.By Steve Gillman. Excerpt from “A Book of Secrets”

Oh my god, I honestly didn’t think this was going to work but it did and I am in awe right now. This is amazing. 

this would be really cool if my eyes weren’t as fucking black as the night sky

fuck i neeeeeeeeed this book wowowowow

someone get me this book

    distraction:

    perfuqed:

    kubbypan:

    karkatquest:

    ohbabyitsnatalie:

    How to read people’s minds.

    Watch Those Pupils
    A persons pupils get bigger when they are aroused, interested and/or receptive. If you look into his or her eyes and see those pupils growing large - it’s looking good for you. Basically big pupils (unless it’s just dark) mean a person likes what they see.

    Try this experiment, and you’ll understand how immediate this effect can be. Go right now and look in the mirror at your own eyes. As you look at them, imagine a sexy man or woman you are attracted to - in whatever way would turn you on. You’ll see that your pupils get bigger in just seconds. Actually, if you love to fish, they may get big just thinking about a lake you love. Anything you like to look at can make your pupils bigger.

    Now, there are two ways to use this.

    1. Mind Reading
    For the mind reading part, you can now watch for changing of pupil size to know if someone is interested in you or what you have to say. And yes, shrinking pupils generally do mean the person is not interested. Just be careful to note if light in the persons eyes is causing the shrinking pupils.

    In addition to judging the general level of interest and/or receptivity to you, you can use pupil size to go a little
    deeper into a person’s mind. For example, during the course of a conversation, you can describe various scenes or delve into different topics, while watching the persons pupils. If their pupils shrank at the mention of skiing, and got huge when you described a beach you like, you can be fairly certain they would like the Bahamas over a ski resort.

    The great thing about this little trick is that you can easily test it and refine your technique. Start with a friend whose interests you know already, and watch their pupils as you describe various places or even ideas. See if getting them to visualize, by saying something “Remember how that car of yours looked,” gets a bigger pupil response.

    2. Influencing
    If you haven’t yet experimented with your own pupils, by watching them in the mirror, go try it now. You’ll find that you can quickly train yourself to change your pupil size at will. Just find a mental image or two that gets them really big, and use these as necessary. Look at a light briefly when you want to shrink your pupils back down. Now, how do you use this?

    We all use little clues like pupil size as we interact with people. We are affected by people’s expressions and body language even when we haven’t yet learned to identify it. In other words - the person in front of you will unconsciously pick upon your enlarging pupils. They will unconsciously take this to mean that you like them,
    and for many people, this will make them like you more.

    Listen. This is the easiest and most effective way to read minds. Just pay attention, ask a few questions and listen to what they say about themselves.

    Watch the Posture. Leaning towards indicates that the person is interested and receptive.

    Watch For Hair Play. When women play with their hair while talking to you, it is almost always a sign of receptivity.

    Watch the Mouth. A slightly open mouth is a sign of curiosity and interest.

    Watch the Head. A tilting head, especially if it comes with a smile and eye contact, is a sign that the person likes you.

    Watch the Eyes 
    Here is what people’s minds are doing when they are thinking or asked to remember something. This is true for most right handed people (reverse all this for left-handed people): As you face them, and their eyes go:
    Up and to the right - they are remembering a visual image.
    Up and to the left - They are constructing a visual image.
    To the right - They are remembering sounds or conversation.
    To the left - The are constructing sounds or conversations.
    Down and to the right - They are in an internal dialog.
    Down and to the left - They are accessing kinesthetic feelings, tastes and smells.

    How to influence the opposite sex:
    Use Mirroring and Matching. Match the speed of your speech to that of the person you’re talking to. Sit like he or she is sitting. Use the words they use. This is a fast way to build rapport. Once there is a “bond” built, you can start to lead the conversation and actions where you want them to go.

    Compliment Her or Him. Discover what the person is proud of first, then find a genuine way to compliment them in that area.

    Listen. Always show a genuine interest in what the person is saying. Ask appropriate questions, so the person knows you’re paying attention. Use their interests to lead into a direction you want to go.

    Make Good First Impressions. Men usually form a quick visual impression in less than 20 seconds, and then make another judgment based on appearance and personality within a couple minutes. Women usually place less immediate emphasis on appearance, and form an “intuitive” first impression in a couple minutes. The lesson? Work fast.

    By Steve Gillman. Excerpt from “A Book of Secrets”

    Oh my god, I honestly didn’t think this was going to work but it did and I am in awe right now. This is amazing. 

    this would be really cool if my eyes weren’t as fucking black as the night sky

    fuck i neeeeeeeeed this book wowowowow

    someone get me this book

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  • taeyeon-9muses-rilakkuma-ohyeah:

    Clever way of getting his features in there

    cr:  thqys

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  • gaysealapproves:

    I found this nice tutorial/anatomy advice spread created by meghanhetrickof deviant art.

    She gave me permission to post it up here to share so go make sure to visit her and look at her other creations of goodness! 

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  • truebluemeandyou:

DIY 30 Halloween Free Fonts from Funky Polkadot Giraffe. When recreating old photobook projects for clients I often use 1942 Report Font for captions done in white on a black background. Combine them with 13 Harry Potter Magical Fonts here. For more unique fonts go here: truebluemeandyou.tumblr.com/tagged/fonts
Part One Halloween Fonts here.
Part Two Halloween Fonts here.

    truebluemeandyou:

    DIY 30 Halloween Free Fonts from Funky Polkadot Giraffe. When recreating old photobook projects for clients I often use 1942 Report Font for captions done in white on a black background. Combine them with 13 Harry Potter Magical Fonts here. For more unique fonts go here: truebluemeandyou.tumblr.com/tagged/fonts

    • Part One Halloween Fonts here.
    • Part Two Halloween Fonts here.

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  • qinni:

    The first one. With references. 

    Full View Here

    Edit: some people have been asking me if i have any more tutorials, which is why i’m reblogging this again :D;;. Hope you guys don’t mind ^^;

    More of my tutorials on tumblr here

    More of my tutorials on dA here

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  • chemicalfreelife:

    .

    DIY ORGANIC:  Urban Gardening!

    .


    “I wanted a carrot without toxic ingredients I didn’t know how to spell.”

    .

    Urban Gardening: An Appleseed With Attitude
    New York Times
     

    “…our food source…It’s been hijacked from us. But if you get soil, plant something in it and water it, you can feed yourself. It’s that simple.” —Ron Finley
    .
    Ron Finley…juggles jobs as a fitness trainer and fashion designer to support his passion for gardening…His radical fix is to take back [urban] land and plant it, even if it’s the skinny strip between concrete and curb….
    He does not receive a salary for his work at L.A. Green Grounds, the volunteer organization he helped found three years ago to install vegetable gardens in vacant lots and sidewalk medians in blighted areas…
    Mr. Finley has been thrust into the unlikely role of pavement-pounding Johnny Appleseed. His talk has received almost 900,000 views on TED’s Web site and his message that edible gardens are the antidote to inner-city health issues, poverty and gang violence (“if you ain’t a gardener, you ain’t gangsta,” he told the crowd) has gone supernova.
    ___
    (photos-urbangrdencasual.com;gardening.about.com;inhabitat.com)

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  • referenceforwriters:

by Chuck Palahniuk 
8 Words You Should Avoid When Writing


As always, Orwell’s final rule applies: “Break any of these rules before saying anything barbarous.” There are instances where each of these words fills a valuable role. However, especially among inexperienced writers, these words are frequently molested and almost always gum up the works.


1. “Suddenly”
“Sudden” means quickly and without warning, but using the word “suddenly” both slows down the action and warns your reader. Do you know what’s more effective for creating the sense of the sudden? Just saying what happens.

I pay attention to every motion, every movement, my eyes locked on them.Suddenly, The gun goes off.

When using “suddenly,” you communicate through the narrator that the action seemed sudden. By jumping directly into the action, you allow the reader to experience that suddenness first hand. “Suddenly” also suffers from being nondescript, failing to communicate the nature of the action itself; providing no sensory experience or concrete fact to hold on to. Just … suddenly.
Feel free to employ “suddenly” in situations where the suddenness is not apparent in the action itself. For example, in “Suddenly, I don’t hate you anymore,” the “suddenly” substantially changes the way we think about the shift in emotional calibration.
2. “Then”
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    referenceforwriters:

    by Chuck Palahniuk 
    8 Words You Should Avoid When Writing

    As always, Orwell’s final rule applies: “Break any of these rules before saying anything barbarous.” There are instances where each of these words fills a valuable role. However, especially among inexperienced writers, these words are frequently molested and almost always gum up the works.

    1. “Suddenly”

    “Sudden” means quickly and without warning, but using the word “suddenly” both slows down the action and warns your reader. Do you know what’s more effective for creating the sense of the sudden? Just saying what happens.

    I pay attention to every motion, every movement, my eyes locked on them.
    Suddenly, The gun goes off.

    When using “suddenly,” you communicate through the narrator that the action seemed sudden. By jumping directly into the action, you allow the reader to experience that suddenness first hand. “Suddenly” also suffers from being nondescript, failing to communicate the nature of the action itself; providing no sensory experience or concrete fact to hold on to. Just … suddenly.

    Feel free to employ “suddenly” in situations where the suddenness is not apparent in the action itself. For example, in “Suddenly, I don’t hate you anymore,” the “suddenly” substantially changes the way we think about the shift in emotional calibration.

    2. “Then”

    Read More

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